[SUCS Devel] [Git][sucssite/sucs-site][master] 2 commits: Minor typo and language fixes to the home page

[Imran Hussain]

Imran Hussain pushed to branch master at sucssite / sucs-site


Commits:
b63bd3d1 by Andrew Price at 2018-12-09T12:07:19Z
Minor typo and language fixes to the home page

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940ae6d2 by Imran Hussain at 2018-12-09T13:38:21Z
Merge branch 'welshbyte/sucs-site-typofixes' into HEAD

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1 changed file:

- htdocs/index.html


Changes:

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htdocs/index.html
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@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
 					<!--<div class="section-header">
 						<h2 class="title">Breif Outline</h2>
 					</div>-->
-					<p>Established in 1988 we are a community of people that enjoy technology and being creative. We also offer a wide variety of services that our members greatly benefit from.</p>
+					<p>Established in 1988 we are a community that enjoys technology and being creative. We also offer a wide variety of services that our members greatly benefit from.</p>
 					<div class="feature">
 						<i class="fa fa-check"></i>
 						<p>Hold regular events both technical and non-technical.</p>
@@ -140,13 +140,13 @@
 					</div>
 					<div class="feature">
 						<i class="fa fa-check"></i>
-						<p>Active alumni network with members working at RedHat, Google, Microsoft etc...</p>
+						<p>Active alumni network with members working at Red Hat, Google, Microsoft, etc...</p>
 					</div>
 				</div>
 
 				<div class="col-md-6">
 					<p>
-						Come chat with us on one of the oldest Bulletin Board Systems in the UK, Milliways!. Exisiting members can log in by SSH'ing into silver (ssh sucs.org) and running the command 'mw'. Non-members can join by SSH'ing in as the user BBS with the password 'bbs' (ssh bbs at sucs.org). There is a quick guide on <a href="https://sucs.org/Knowledge/Help/SUCS%20Services/Using%20Milliways">Using MW</a> that is recommended.
+						Come chat with us on one of the oldest Bulletin Board Systems in the UK, Milliways! Existing members can log in by SSH'ing into silver (ssh sucs.org) and running the command 'mw'. Non-members can join by SSH'ing in as the user 'bbs' with the password 'bbs' (ssh bbs at sucs.org). There is a quick guide on <a href="https://sucs.org/Knowledge/Help/SUCS%20Services/Using%20Milliways">Using MW</a> that is recommended.
 					</p>
 					<p>
 						We also run a <a href="https://chat.sucs.org">Discord</a> server that is more easily accessible on a wider variety of platforms.
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
 					<div class="service">
 						<i class="fa fa-users"></i>
 						<h3>Community</h3>
-						<p>With over 100 members from all manner of backgrounds SUCS has a rich diverse community.</p>
+						<p>With over 100 members from all manner of backgrounds SUCS has a rich and diverse community.</p>
 					</div>
 				</div>
 				<!-- /service -->
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
 					<div class="service">
 						<i class="fa fa-server"></i>
 						<h3>Web Hosting</h3>
-						<p>Members can take advantage of our web-hosting faculties to showcase their work or ideas.</p>
+						<p>Members can take advantage of our web-hosting facilities to showcase their work or ideas.</p>
 					</div>
 				</div>
 				<!-- /service -->
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 					<div class="service">
 						<i class="fa fa-code"></i>
 						<h3>Projects</h3>
-						<p>We run numerous projects that people can jump in and out. Support for hosting your own projects is possible with our own Gitlab server</p>
+						<p>We run numerous projects that people can jump in and out of. Hosting your own projects is possible with our own GitLab server</p>
 					</div>
 				</div>
 				<!-- /service -->



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